Thank you Mister Finch

Switched from a 2B to an HB pencil, dulled the point quite a bit, and I like the way it draws. Though I did pick up the 2B for the darker accents. 

Bodies

I was gonna wait till I have more but this'll have to do:

Yeah it's rough and hairy - the 1st one especially, which I didn't consider worth taking any farther due to too many problems, though there are things I like about it. The other one I cleaned up better, though not completely. These are working drawings - just developing my comic-style figures with some more detail on them. And as I said earlier (here or on ConceptArt?) - when I'm working outside my comfort zone I do tend to draw hairy. It's because as I go I can start to see what the shapes need to look like, and I go in and change them sort of spastically. Not great I know, but I suspect when I learn the body better I'll be able to draw it crisper and cleaner